I've been working on a couple edits as suggested when I showed the current animatic in class. I'm changing the mirror scene where he's wiping his makeup off, mostly because I really didn't like the zooming and decided a brief cutaway would be a better way to get in closer to see his scar. I'm also adding red to his scar, so it stands out more, and I'm changing the transition between him at the cemetary to him just smoking and the smoke filling the screen. I added more graves in that scene as well, and I'm also going to add that final scene I talked about earlier of him in the bath. I plan on posting it tommorrow with these edits! It's diffcult getting stuff done after work so it's harder for me to get a lot of progress on these days, but I'm trying to immediately after I get home from work sit down and make some progress.